Select a students' writing prompt from another class. Copy and paste the students' comment as a quote. 1) Tell why you selected that students' response. 2) Tell what you liked about the response; 3) whether you agree or disagreee and why. 4) Then tell how the response could be improved.
5-7 sentences.
20 minutes
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Devonte (Sai Shadow) said...
ReplyDeletethe three qualities that a succesful person has is being respectful to everyone, being good in school, and having healthy ways.
The habits that unsuccesful people have is being disrespectful, doing bad things and dont go to school.
I selected Devonte's reponse because I'd think it was an great response he came with a good introduction about "being respectful to everyone" which was very good and from what I'd think throughout the rest of the sentences were also great too. But from what i think so far is he still need some more qualities of an unsuccessful more than he has on an successful person, but other than that it was a good response.
Rashia Kelly said...
ReplyDeleteThree things that people need to be successful to me they need to be intelligent,determined,and opened mind.an unsucessful person would be careless and undetermined.i think the being determined is the key to sucess.and i was always told that you can do anything if you put your mind to it.
Rasiha i agree with you that people do need to be open mind also determined. And an unsucessful person would be undetermined wich is kind of the same thing that i said. Also i belive that if you put your mind to anything you can do it. This was good but you need to check your spelling and grammer because there were alot of mistakes. I also had a hard time reading it so next time could correct your grammer no offense. But otherwise this was good.
BRIAN PARGO said...
ReplyDeleteA successful person will suceed in life an will also have the right home an family but the other stuff i just didnt do.
I seclected this student response because of how seen great to me. It have alot of info on successful person and about the life.I agree,a successful is alot like that in some ways. It needed info on a unsuccessful person and lit bit more on successful person.
BRIAN PARGO said...
ReplyDeleteA successful person will suceed in life an will also have the right home an family but the other stuff i just didnt do.
Tommy Rogers
I selected it because he had a good point. What I liked about it was he said that a successful person will always succeed in life, and will have a family to take care of. I agree because if your successful you will have no problems what so ever you cannot solve. He could improve on writing a little bit more than he did.
Scott Williams said...
ReplyDeleteScott A successful person would have good people skills,would know how to make and save and spend money, he know how to do and hanled busesses,and he know how to act around people.An unsuccesful preson not good people skills,thay'd would know idea how make,save,and spend money,or handle or do busesses,and they would'nt know how act around people.
I like the way scott worded his comment and i agree with everything he said because it's true you do have to have people skill you have to save money and etc... next time though go back and check your reading ..
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ReplyDeleteErick South said...
A successful person is a person that is ahead in life and they know what they want in life and they keep there head on straight.
I chose Ericks comment because to me these are the qualities of a successful person, Someone who succeeds above average. They have money to take care of theirselves and their families and if needed support other habbits, like shopping or frequent vacations. They own everything from the car to the house. I thik he could've improved this comment by being more specific about both the successful and unsuccessful persons lifestyle.
Devonte (Sai Shadow) said...
ReplyDeletethe three qualities that a succesful person has is being respectful to everyone, being good in school, and having healthy ways.
The habits that unsuccesful people have is being disrespectful, doing bad things and dont go to school
I agree with you a little except on one thing. When you said that a unsuccesful person dosent go to school thats wrong. I know a couple of people that arent succseful but they still go to school. Thats the only reason that i say that i dont disagree.
jared meridy said...
ReplyDeleteThree wualitys they might have. One is they will always be determined unless they are lazy. Another they also might be snoty and stuck up. Another quality is they will be wise about how they spend there money. An unsucessful buisnes person wont ever try to acomplish anything. They also would probably waste there money. The importan quality is learn how to spend your money wisely especialy if you are going to invest in your buissnes
I selected this one for is that I want them to know that there spelling is wrong and way of not to be disrespectful, but this doesnt make since with the choice of words, but I get what he is saying about not being succesful and not succesful. I like it for he talks about businesses and i would like to be in the business industry. I agree with him for you wont be able to do anything without doing something in trying to make someone life better. Could be improved by having better spelling and use of words.
SHAYLA MILES
ReplyDeleteJareall Montgomery said... I believe that any successful person should have stamina, determination, and self respect.
I picked this response because it shows alot about a person personality and you should always have self respect.
Shakeal Heard said...
ReplyDeleteThree qualities a successful has are intelligence, determination, and a positive attitude. Unsuccessful people are disruptive, lack effort, and dedication. The most important quality for a successful person to have is a positive attitude. As long as you stay positive you can get yourself through any problem.
I agree with him because all of these things would help you with your success. You need them too because you cant be an negative person because they dont make it very far. Also staying will let people that they can trust you to get the job done. When positive people have problems they would get help before negative people. When being up on your game you would put in so much hard to where you can miss maybe a couple of days. But when you dont do anything you do not have time for the games.
Brandi Cooper said...
ReplyDeleteGive three qualities that you believe a successful person would have. Also discuss habits that an unsuccessful person might possess. Which of the qualities of a successful person do you think are most important?
A sucessful person is responsible,and also well organized.They are really good at getting their job done.Quality's a unsuccesful person maty have are lazy,has alot of negitive energy or just don't get along with anyone. Quality's that i feel are important in a succesful person is good at listening and also good worker.
i like all of it because you can larn from it
I liked this person's response because it is something I would probably say. I said something close to that. I do agree with everything that they said on there comments. I don't think that needs to be improved. so that is my opinion today.
ReplyDeleteBRIAN PARGO said...
ReplyDeleteA successful person will suceed in life an will also have the right home an family but the other stuff i just didnt do.
I selected this student response because he made it seem intelligent. I think he is right a successful person will always succeed in life. I think he could have left the last part out. This person didn’t make it clear and he also could have explained more about a successful person. He also misspelled some words and didn’t capitalize some words.
A successful person will suceed in life an will also have the right home an family but the other stuff i just didnt do.
ReplyDeleteI seclected this student response because of how seen great to me. It have alot of info on successful person and about the life.I agree,a successful is alot like that in a ways. It needed more info on a unsuccessful person and more on successful person.
Devonte (Sai Shadow) said...
ReplyDeletethe three qualities that a succesful person has is being respectful to everyone, being good in school, and having healthy ways.
The habits that unsuccesful people have is being disrespectful, doing bad things and dont go to school
I agree with you a little except on one thing. When you said that a unsuccesful person dosent go to school thats wrong. I know a couple of people that arent succseful but they still go to school. Thats the only reason that i say that i dont disagree.
February 10, 2009 5:29 AM
I choose this because it made it sense in many ways about being successful and the steps you will need
A successful person is a person that is ahead in life and they know what they want in life and they keep there head on straight.
ReplyDeleteA unsuccessful person is a person who just sit around and does nothing at all and they depend on other people.
Erick South
I chose this because he made a very good point. I like this one because he also had very good points and also he used a very nice organization of words. I think that when you want to be successful you have to have your head on staight and he clearly stated that. I didnt however like how he only gave just one important things and I feel that there is more than one.
The most qualities that a successful person does that is most important is a nice good quaility job, a nice beautiful car, a mansion or a dream house and a nice lovely family.
ReplyDeleteBruce had some pionts that I didn't hit on. But those things he siad somepeople need a family ned to be successful person. They might need a car to fell successful person. they might need a mansion to look successful I know I would probualy would.
SHAYLA MILES
ReplyDeleteJareall Montgomery said... I believe that any successful person should have stamina, determination, and self respect.
Shayla Miles said:
I picked this response because it shows alot about a person personality and you should always have self respect.
john miller
what made you pick this response don't you think that instead of having a good personality and self respect don't you think that you should think about the finest things in life like finishing your goals and what you have planed for the future.
"Three qualities a successful preson have is intelligence, knowin what they want in life, and a positive attitude. An unsuccessful person is disruptive, negative attitude, and no dedication to work. The most important quality for a successful is to know what you want and dont be afraid to go get it and a positive attitude."
ReplyDelete-Damonte Logan
I chose Demonte's response to the writing prompt because I totally agree with what he said. You do have to be smart to be successful, you do have to know what you want and the goal that you're working towards, and you must have a positive attitude. These things are very important factors of successfulness. I think that this response could be improved with better wording, other than that, I believe that he did a good job.
Precious K said...
ReplyDeleteI believe a successful person would have self respect and represent there self and other in a good way and a person with no successfulness in them dont repersent there self in no kind of way always getting kicked out of school and skipping really just not giving a care.
I choose this persons quote because,she sounded very educated in her response and she wrote about all areas. I liked when she said a succesful person must be responsible.I agree because,you can't be succesful without responsibilty it goes hand and hand.It can be improved by maybe writing a little more.
Shakeal Heard said...
ReplyDeleteThree qualities a successful has are intelligence, determination, and a positive attitude. Unsuccessful people are disruptive, lack effort, and dedication. The most important quality for a successful person to have is a positive attitude. As long as you stay positive you can get yourself through any problem.
I picked Shakeal's quote because I agree with what he said a successful person should have. It would take you very far to have those three qualities. He was also right about unsuccessful people having a lack of effort because they can't suceed if they are lazy and don't want to do anything.
Lakesha Barrett
raisha said Three things that people need to be successful to me they need to be intelligent,determined,and opened mind.an unsucessful person would be careless and undetermined.i think the being determined is the key to sucess.and i was always told that you can do anything if you put your mind to it.
ReplyDeletei picked rashia quote because it is good facts and give advice in a way and i believe that you can do anthing as long as you put your mind into it in her quote she could have rote a little more but other than that i like what she was saying
bruceroman said...
ReplyDeleteThe Three most qualities that I believe that a successful person would have its own buissness, his/her own house, a family and its own car. An unsuccessful person might posses as an unemployment person, no house, no car, or even he/she might not even have a family on their own.
The most qualities that a successful person does that is most important is a nice good quaility job, a nice beautiful car, a mansion or a dream house and a nice lovely family
February 9, 2009 5:32 AM I picked this one cause its right an if u dont finish school then u want have a nice home,a wife and kids u will be living on the street or with ur mom or somewhere on the street if u dont finish school then this what will happen to u
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ReplyDeletebrandi cooper said.....A sucessful person is responsible,and also well organized.They are really good at getting their job done.Quality's a unsuccesful person may have are lazy,has alot of negitive energy or just don't get along with anyone. Quality's that i feel are important in a succesful person is good at listening and also good worker.
ReplyDeleteI Alex would go with her suggestion because a suceessful person has to have a responsibilty for some type of reason, and it's allways a reasons for someone to do something ,and a not successful person just don't know where to begin so they just sit on the coach all day and smoke on new-ports.
Scott A successful person would have good people scott said skills,would know how to make and save and spend money, he know how to do and hanled busesses,and he know how to act around people.An unsuccesful preson not good people skills,thay'd would know idea how make,save,and spend money,or handle or do busesses,and they would'nt know how act around people.
ReplyDeletei agree with what he said i like his fact and i dont disagree on anything because he explained his self in a good way
A successful person would have good people skills,would know how to make and save and spend money, he know how to do and handle businesses,and he know how to act around people.
ReplyDeleteI chose this quote because if this person have all of these qualities they will be a very successful person and they won't let anything get in there way or stop them.
Devonte (Sai Shadow) said...
ReplyDeletethe three qualities that a succesful person has is being respectful to everyone, being good in school, and having healthy ways.
The habits that unsuccesful people have is being disrespectful, doing bad things and dont go to school.
I selected Devonte's reponse because I'd think it was an great response he came with a good introduction about "being respectful to everyone" which was very good and from what I'd think throughout the rest of the sentences were also great too. But from what i think so far is he still need some more qualities of an unsuccessful more than he has on an successful person, but other than that it was a good response.
February 10, 2009 5:16 AM
jared meridy said...
J Mill said...
ReplyDeleteThreeq ualitys they might have. One is they will always be determined unless they are lazy. Another they also might be snoty and stuck up. Another quality is they will be wise about how they spend there money. An unsucessful buisnes person wont ever try to acomplish anything. They also would probably waste there money. The importan quality is learn how to spend your money wisely especialy if you are going to invest in your buissnes
I pick John Miller because his was pretty impressive to me. His have a point to it the successful part and the unsuccessfl part. I liked it. But he could have add a little more details and the successful part but I still like it because he got a point.
erick south said....A successful person is a person that is ahead in life and they know what they want in life and they keep there head on straight.
ReplyDeleteA unsuccessful person is a person who just sit around and does nothing at all and they depend on other people.
I alex agree with this statement because if your head is not swreded on right you could keep your head and don;t let nobody say or do anything to stop your shine. And unsuccessful people are known to depend on someone to help them which if they was successful they could and would do it on their on.
Shakeal Heard said...
ReplyDeleteThree qualities a successful has are intelligence, determination, and a positive attitude. Unsuccessful people are disruptive, lack effort, and dedication. The most important quality for a successful person to have is a positive attitude. As long as you stay positive you can get yourself through any problem.
I chose Shakeal's because I think that he made a lot of good points about succeessful and unsuccessful people. I agree that a successful person is intelligent, determined and has a positive attitude. I think that in order for a person to be successful they have to be determined to get to achieve their goals. I also agree that a successful person also has to have some intelligence and a positive attitude. I also agree that unsuccessful people are disruptive and have no type of dedication or will to succeed.