Capitalization is an important part of writing. When you do not capitalize in your writing, you may be communicating to the reader that you do not understand some writing rules.
1. Find another student's writing prompt that needed to apply capitalization rules. You do not need to use the person's name.
2. Copy the student's writing prompt as is and paste it to your comment below.
3. Press enter twice after his/her prompt then rewrite the prompt correctly.
4. Tell what capitalization rule the person failed to correct, i.e. The word "I" should always be capitalized.
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Capitalization is an important part of writing. When you do not capitalize in your writing, you may be communicating to the reader that you do not understand some writing rules.
ReplyDelete1. Find another student's writing prompt that needed to apply capitalization rules. You do not need to use the person's name.
2. Copy the student's writing prompt as is and paste it to your comment below.
3. Press enter twice after his/her prompt then rewrite the prompt correctly.
4. Tell what capitalization rule the person failed to correct, i.e. The word "I" should always be capitalized.
There were a lot of things that I did that I felt didnt go so right. The main thing is my grades in school. I think maybe if I do my work I couldve gotten better grades. I think if I work own my self control I could do better. I think I also have to learn how to give people the respect they deserve.
Me: she did a very good job on her writing prompt there was not any problems.
This is Patricks writing prompt. i dont thick my income will match with my spending on my projects because i dont have enough money to finsh it i would have some cash left probely.
ReplyDeleteI don't think my income will match with my spending time on my projects because I don't have enough money to finish it. I would have some cash left probably.
He didn't capitalize I. And don't didn't have any punctuation marks between the n and the t
Yes it would be better if i could know my grades in the class on daily basis.I know it would be a beter advantages to knowing my gradebecausse i would know what i need to do to get my grade up. Yes because i know if im failing or if im up to date.
ReplyDeleteYes it would be better if I could know my grades in the class on daily basis. I know it would be a better advantages to knowing my grades because I would know what I need to do to get my grades up. Yes because I know if I'm failing or if I'm up to date.
I think it will because if you can put that much effort into working on a school project then you should be able to have a high income on your job and get everything done on time that what i think.because you base your job as a regular day school it's the same but the only differnce is a job you are on your own.
ReplyDeleteMe: This guy gotta do better on his writing skills he gotta work on putting the capital letters in the right places.
I don't think my income will match with my spending on my project because i don't have enough money to finish it I would have some cash left probably.
ReplyDeleteHe didn't capitalize I.
i dont thick my income will match with my spending on my projects because i dont have enough money to finsh it i would have some cash left probely.
I think it will because if you can put that much effort into working on a school project then you should be able to have a high income on your job and get everything done on time that what i think.because you base your job as a regular day school it's the same but the only differnce is a job you are on your own.
ReplyDeleteMe: This guy gotta do better on his writing skills he gotta work on putting the capital letters in the right places.
Anonymous:
ReplyDeleteI would look like my life i would eveything about myself on it. i would tell wha my life is about and what im doing in my life. i would not half of the thing about my life.
My correction and replacements:
I would put things about my life and I would put everything about myself on it. I would tell what my life is about and what I am doing in my life.
Lakesha Barrett
I want people to remember me as a full on entertainer and a good person.
ReplyDeleteAaliyah
I think she meant she want people to remember her as a funny person and as herself. I chose this quote because i want to remember me as myself to not only as a funny person I can use this in my daily life by treat other people the same ways as i want to be treated.
--I think Aaliyah meant that she wants people to remember her for the good and funny person that she is. I can use this in my daily life by treating other people the same way as I would want to be treated.
mistakes: the [I], also the person had extra words that were not needed, [.]at the end of the word person
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ReplyDeleteI think it will because if you can put that much effort into working on a school project then you should be able to have a high income on your job and get everything done on time that what i think.because you base your job as a regular day school it's the same but the only differnce is a job you are on your own.
ReplyDeleteThis character did not capitalize the I in thier sentence.They also started a sentece with because.
I think it will because if you can put that much effort into working on a school project then you should be able to have a high income on your job and get everything done on time that what I think. You base your job as a regular day school it's the same but the only differnce is a job you are on your own.
The quote i chose is "The first step to getting the things you want out of life is this: Decide what you want."
ReplyDeleteThe reason why i chose this quote is because you should always decide what you want befor you try to do anything else. And how i can use this quote in my daily living is think of what i want to do and then do whats right.
The quote I chose is "The first step to getting the things you want out of life is this: Decide what you want."
The reason why I chose this quote is because you should always decide what you want befor you try to do anything else. And how I can use this quote in my daily living is think of what I want to do and then do whats right.
If i were to create a website for my project it would be a regular website. It would also have things about me, family, friend, and if you want to know anything just seach for it and take you to whatever it is you wanna know. If i didn't have a computer to look for what i needed to know than i'll have to call out placs or vist to get the information i know need to know
ReplyDeleteIf I were to create a website for my project it would be a regular website. It would also have things about me, my family, friends, and if you want to know anything just seach for it and it would take you to whatever it is you wanna know. If I didn't have a computer to look for what I needed to know than i'll have to call out placs or vist to get the information I know need to know.
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ReplyDeleteThere were a lot of things that I did that I felt didnt go so right. The main thing is my grades in school. I think maybe if I do my work I couldve gotten better grades. I think if I work own my self control I could do better. I think I also have to learn how to give people the respect they deserve.
ReplyDeleteI think that there are two things that are wrong. The first one is telling someone to do your work is wrong. Doing your own work is better. The second one is you shouldn't learn how to respect others you should know how.
Tank Phillips
ReplyDeleteDo you think your income will match your spending on your projects? How are you going to afford your luxuries?
i know my income will match my spending on my project.I made sure of that.yes i can afford what i need right now but when i get down with college it will be better.
Do you think your income will match your spending on your projects? How are you going to afford your luxuries?
Correct Version
I know my income will match my spending on my project.I made sure of that,yes I can afford what I need right now. But when I get down with college it will be better.
The reason I pick yours is because had one run on sentences. You had (I) not captailizied. But got all good so you are good now.
i know my income will match my spending on my project.I made sure of that.yes i can afford what i need right now but when i get down with college it will be better.
ReplyDeleteI know my income will match my spending om my project. I made sure of that. Yes I can afford waht I need right now but when I get down with college it will be better.
I choose this prompt because the (I's) was not captailized and (yes) was not captailized at the begining of the sentence.
i dont thick my income will match with my spending on my projects because i dont have enough money to finsh it i would have some cash left probely.
ReplyDeleteI choose this writing prompt because his (I's) was not captailized and at the end of this sentence dosen't make sence.
Do you think your income will match your spending on your projects? How are you going to afford your luxuries?
ReplyDeletei know my income will match my spending on my project.I made sure of that.yes i can afford what i need right now but when i get down with college it will be better.
Do you think your income will match your spending on your projects? How are you going to afford your luxuries?
Corrections
I know my income will matchyour spending on my project.I made sure of that.Yes I can afford what I need right now but I get done with collage it will be better.
(1)Capitalization was not correct.(2)A run on sentences.(3) And you had when I get down with collage and I think that you should have had when I get done with in stead but I fixed so no worries ok.
Corrected by Tiffany Powell
I think she meant she want people to remember her as a funny woman and as herself. I chose this quote because i want to remember myself to not only as a funny person I can use this in my daily life by treat other people the same ways as i want to be treated.I get down with collage and I think that will match with my spending on my projects.
ReplyDeleteCapitalization is an important part of writing. When you do not capitalize in your writing, you may be communicating to the reader that you do not understand some writing rules.
ReplyDelete1. Find another student's writing prompt that needed to apply capitalization rules. You do not need to use the person's name.
2. Copy the student's writing prompt as is and paste it to your comment below.
3. Press enter twice after his/her prompt then rewrite the prompt correctly.
4. Tell what capitalization rule the person failed to correct, i.e. The word "I" should always be capitalized.
I WOULD HAVE TO SAY YES. I SAY YES BECAUSE WHAT I AM DOING IN MY PROJECT I AM PLANNING ON DOING IN REAL LIFE. I TALKING BOUT FROM THE BANK I ANT TO THE CARS, I WANT IT ALL. SO THAT IS WHY I SAID YES. I AM GOING TO WORK HARD TO AFFORD MY LUXURIES.
I would have to say yes. I say yes because what I am dong on my project, I am planning on doing it in real life. I’m talking about being from the bank and to the cars, I would like to have it all. So this is why I say yes. I will be working hard to get wear I want to be.
She capatilized all her words/letters and they shouldn't only if there at the beginning of a sentence or using the letter I.
If i were to create my own wevsite for my project it would be all red when you first go on it. To share your information you would have to go to the story and buy you a mic and an camra so that people can see you and know how you look bacause i know sometimes people lie and say they look like something when they really look like something else. Without the computer my project would be like the same way but you would just have to meet the person in person.
ReplyDeleteIf I were to create my own website for my project it would be all red when you first go on it. To share your information you would have to go to the story to buy you a camera so that people can see you and know how you look bacause I know sometimes people lie and say they look like something when they really look like something else. Without the computer my project would be like the same way but you would just have to meet the person in person.
1)The letter I was not capitalization.
2)The word website and camera was mispell.
3)One of the sentences had the word and two in it.
4) One of the sentences had mix words in it.
Bruce: YES I DO BELEIVE THAT STUDENTS FAIL TO WEAR THE UNIFORM LOL JUST PLAYIN BUT THE REASON WHY STUDENTS FAIL TO WEAR THEIR UNIFORMS BECAUSE SOME OF THEM CAN'T THE UNIFORMS OR SOME JUST DON'T LIKE WEARING UNIFORMS PERIOD BECAUSE I GUESS THEY DON'T FEEL RIGHT, BUT STILL YOU STILL HAVE TO FOLLOW THE SCHOOL POLICY OF THE DRESS CODE VIOLATION.
ReplyDeleteStudents fail to wear their uniforms beacuse, some of them can't the uniforms or some just don't like to wear them period. I guess they just don't feel right wearing them. Bottom line you still have to have to follow the school policy, or it's called a dress code violation.
First he capitalized every thing and his sentence was to long.
That I would have to say yes because you know its important of what you doing such as on tests, assignments, and also quizez and application. so I think its very important to capitilize on some of the work you need to be doing.
ReplyDeletebruce: YES I DO BELEIVE THAT STUDENTS FAIL TO WEAR THE UNIFORM LOL JUST PLAYIN BUT THE REASON WHY STUDENTS FAIL TO WEAR THEIR UNIFORMS BECAUSE SOME OF THEM CAN'T THE UNIFORMS OR SOME JUST DON'T LIKE WEARING UNIFORMS PERIOD BECAUSE I GUESS THEY DON'T FEEL RIGHT, BUT STILL YOU STILL HAVE TO FOLLOW THE SCHOOL POLICY OF THE DRESS CODE VIOLATION.
ReplyDeleteI Believe Students fail to uniforms,Because on somedays people don't feel like wearing uniform.
He capitalized everything and only put one period.
Capitalization is an important part of writing. When you do not capitalize in your writing, you may be communicating to the reader that you do not understand some writing rules.
ReplyDelete1. Find another student's writing prompt that needed to apply capitalization rules. You do not need to use the person's name.
2. Copy the student's writing prompt as is and paste it to your comment below.
3. Press enter twice after his/her prompt then rewrite the prompt correctly.
4. Tell what capitalization rule the person failed to correct, i.e. The word "I" should always be capitalized.
The quote I chose is "The first step to getting the things you want out of life is this: Decide what you want."
The reason why I chose this quote is because you should always decide what you want befor you try to do anything else. And how I can use this quote in my daily living is think of what I want to do and then do whats right.
Me: she did a good job because she used captial letter and punctionations
Shayla Miles
Tommy Rogers
ReplyDeletei dont thick my income will match with my spending on my projects because i dont have enough money to finsh it i would have some cash left probely.
I don't think my income will match with my spending on my projects because I don't have enough money to finish it I would have some cash left probaly.
This person didn't capitalize, he never put an ' on his word don't and he mispelled some words.
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ReplyDeleteshe did a very good job on her writing prompt there was not any problems.
ReplyDeleteIn what the person wrote I didnt see any problems that the person wrote as a mistake either because of all of the people wrote the person didnt write alot
devin moore
One of the students is not capitalizing the wrong thing at a time there are not suppose to at the time
ReplyDeleteterrance Watts
I think she meant she want people to remember her as a funny woman and as herself. I chose this quote because i want to remember myself daily life by treat other people the same ways as i want to be treated.I get down with collage and I think that will match with my spending on my projects.
ReplyDeleteCorrection
I think she meant she wants people to remember her as a funny womanand as herself. I chose this quote because I want to remember myself to not only as a funny person I can use this in my daily life by treating other people the same ways as I want to be treated.When I get done with collage I think that will match with my spending on my projects.