What is happening in this picture? How do you think negative criticism can affect a person? Do you think about people's feelings before you make comments? Why or why not? What advice can you give the actor in the picture?
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Sunday, October 4, 2009
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ReplyDeleteshe's hanging her self when she supose to be dancing
ReplyDeleteryan board
9th
2hour
I think that it means to be careful what you say about people because he can hurt there feelings.
ReplyDeleteKeyosha Abdullah
9th
2nd hour
i think because of the mens critisim about how she danced made her want to kill her self because she couldn't dance like he wanted her to
ReplyDeletedaquisha street
2nd hour
9th grade
What's happening in this picture is the downing of a student who tried. the teacher's negativity has provoked the student to hang her career of dancing up. i would tell her don't worry about the others and if your good then your good. Chris Jones. Writing Prompt.
ReplyDeleteshe cant dance so she wants to hang her self
ReplyDeleteUALLEN
the teachers talked about her dancing and it made her feel bad so now she wants to hang her self.
ReplyDeleteJalah Young
9th
10/5
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ReplyDeleteWEN DA TEACHER KEEP TELLING DA STUDENT SHE GOT TIRED OF BEING CRITICIZED
ReplyDeleteCOLE TOWNES
9TH GRADE
duvarce kazee 9th 10-5-09
ReplyDeletei think the first guy is telling the second guy to stop giving bad critisism to his student. negetive critisism can put a person down and effect there performace at any thing. some times i think about the way they will feel after i comment.
Jason Gaines
ReplyDeleteIn this picture there is person thats about to hang herself. Negative criticism can make a person feel bad about there self. While talk to people, I think about how they feeling, because you never know what mood there in. The person that's about to hang thirself don't feel bad about herself.
ashley project is kool
ReplyDeleteryan
I like ashly becauase she share some of her detail that she like to do.by charles gaines
ReplyDeletelanva was real good
ReplyDeleteryan
No i dont think about people feeling becuase we black black people should be used to gettin blazed on if somthing aint done right so thats why i dont think about people feeling cuz thats just the way it iz like 2 pac song
ReplyDeleteWHATS HAPPENING IN THIS PICTURE IS A GIRL IS ABOUT TO HANG HERSELF BECAUSE HER TEACHER'S CRITISISM TOWARD HER DANCING SKILLS.NEGATIVE CRTISISM AFFECTS A PERSON BECAUSE IT PUTS THEM DOWN AND MAKES A PERSON FEEL LOW.DO I THINK ABOUT PEOPLES FEELINGS BEFOR I MAKE COMMENTS? I'LL HAVE TO SAY NO BECAUSE THEY DONT THINK ABOUT MINE WHEN THEY MAKE THEM.
ReplyDeletein this picture there is a person about to hang himself.negative criticism can make a person feel bad about themself.yas i think about other peoples feeling because younever know that they can feel worse then you do.i would tell him not to do it because he is not just herting his self he is hurting other people to.
ReplyDeleteDaynesha Archibald
3rd hour
10th grade
I DO THINK ABOUT PEOPLE FEELINGS. I DONT'T DOWN TALK PEOPLE BECAUSE I DON'T WANT PEOPLE TO DO ME LIKE THAT. MY NUMBER 1N RULES IS TREAT OHTERS AS YOU WILL LIKE TO TREATED. SOMETIMES CRITICSIM CAN BE HARMFUL THAT'S WHY I DON'T DO A LOT. EVERYONE WANTS TO BE TREATED WITH RESPECT SO THEY SHOULD TREAT PEOPLE WITH RESPECT.
ReplyDeleteMONTEL BROWN
10TH 3RD HOUR
10/5/09
What is happening in this picture? How do you think negative criticism can affect a person? Do you think
ReplyDeleteA student is about to hang himself because of what people saying about his dancing. I think negative criticism can affect people by lowing their self-esteem and make them think they don't mean nothing. Becasue of how people put them down everytime they do something. Yes I thin about people feelings before I comment because I know how it feels to have low self-esteem. The advice I can give the author is not to let no one get to you even if they talking very bad about you.
ROXANE BRADDOCK
10TH
3RD HOUR
10/5/09
i think criticism can make people feel bad about there self
ReplyDeleteIn the picture a man has critisized a another person and i guess her self esteem is low so she has taken it to the point where she feels that she needs to kill her self. Negitive words can hurt people because if its not true rummers can begain and stuff. It would hurt a person that tries to do things right.You should think about a person before you say something because you might not be able toi say sorry. I would tell the actor that she shouldnt be listening and or reacting to bad opinions.
ReplyDeleteno i dont think about people feelings because its not my responsibility and and if they feelings get hurt oh well they just gotta suck it up because we got the freedom of speech and we can say whatever we want so if they dont like it they can get to steppin cuz DIZ DA HOOD
ReplyDeleteno i dont think you should critisize people cuz it wrong
ReplyDeleteA man is getting ready to hang his self. That we got sick people in the world. Yes i do think about people feelings before i make any comments. Why because i dont want nobody talking about me to hurt my feelings. Dont feel bad about your Self.
ReplyDeleteDamien Hubbard
3rd Block
October 5,2009
a girl getting ready to hange herself, cause her techer was talking about her danceing, no i do not, cause i just dont,dont hang herself do something else or something i guess.
ReplyDeletemaryetta blue
The picture dislays the whole relationship between two people you cant judge people by what you see you can judge them on thier personality doe you can judge somebody becuase they cant dance just keep your comment to yourself.
ReplyDeleteRodney polk
cut off for 3rd block
ReplyDeleteThis comic that features a student committing a hanging of her self due to the discouragement stature of dancing from her teacher. His opin on greatly coincides with her life-style decions and she believes that she has no chance other than dancing if she would resort to suicide. The only advice I could give her would be to consider other option and lifestyes rather than dancing, to chose something that better suite her interest.
ReplyDeleteThe student hanging his self because the teacher maybe didnt give the student good remarks.Deontae.B
ReplyDeleteshe need a captle leader on her stuff.by laquan i think because of the mens critisim about how she danced made her want to kill her self because she couldn't dance like he wanted her to
ReplyDeletedaquisha street