Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Writing Prompt 10/27/09

Find a writing prompt with grammar errors. Copy and paste it in your post. Tell what was wrong with it then fix it.

20 points.
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12 comments:

  1. KeyoshaOctober 27, 2009 at 5:36 AM

    ~ Communication is the real work of leadership~
    This qoute means that that speak your mind and not focus on what every one else think.

    Keyisha A

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  2. bookieOctober 27, 2009 at 5:36 AM

    I will let my class play games all day

    its not whole sentence. it doesn't has a priod

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  3. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 5:38 AM

    jalah said...
    When I graduate I plan to go to college somewhere in Atlanta. I might not need to type in my job, but I would need to learm how to type because I would have to type papers and or print them. I would have to read it first for any errors.

    jalah young
    9th
    10/20


    By: Germaine Meeks 10-27-09

    She has to many writing errors. She has no capitalization. On the last sentence she make no sense of what she is writing.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 5:38 AM

    when i graduate i plan to go to college somewhere in atlanta. i might not need to type in my job, but i would need to learm how to type because i would have to type papers or talk to papers.



    Jalah sentences was wrong because she didnt capatalize the I's in her sentences and she didnt capatalize in the beginning of her sentences.

    Ashley Towns
    9th Grade
    2nd Hr.

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  5. Daquisha aka MZ.OREOOctober 27, 2009 at 5:42 AM

    It is very important to have a good relationship with the students by. Having sufficient work done be able to work with each other. So that there wont be ant miss understandings have work prepard if the other person is not here.

    WHATS WRONG WITH THIS WRITING PROOMPT IS THE SP33LING IS WRONG.

    DAQUISHA STREET
    9TH
    GRADE

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  6. jalahOctober 27, 2009 at 5:44 AM

    {u dont have to like your techer but u can get your work done if u dont like your techer or not if u dont like your techer and u dont get your work done u just going to get a bad grade in the class then u is going to see the same texher next year so why go all out about not likeing your techer we u can ust do your work and get out the class}


    **Whats wrong with this prompt is that some of the words are spelled wrong, they're supposed to spell 'you' the right way and theres not any punctuation marks**

    Jalah Young
    9th
    10|27

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  7. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 5:45 AM

    Ashley walton
    2nd hour
    9th grade
    i think people are lonely when they is at the top because, when youre at the top you have nobdody
    there for you, and not many people make it to the top.

    Jalah Young
    9th
    10/1

    i chose jalah writting prompt because she had some errors.first of all she started her sentence of with because, you should nevver start your sentence of with because.2nd of all she was sopose to put a comma after you have know one there for you. 3rd osf all she sopposed to said not many people make it to the top, instead of not many people make to the top!

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  8. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 5:45 AM

    she's hanging her self when she supose to be dancing


    ryan board

    9th

    2hour


    Laneva Jones
    2nd hr
    9th grd

    Ryan's response had a lot af incorrection's. He should have first restated the question then wrote his answer. There were also capitalization and grammer error's. I would have wrote it like this:
    In the picture it show's a dance student hanging herself after experiencing critism from her dance teacher. She's hanging herself while she should be dancing.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 27, 2009 at 6:33 AM

    Do you think it would be helpful for you to know your grades in the class on a daily basis? What are the advantages to knowing your earned grade each day? Is it worth the effort to keep track? Tell why or why not?

    because you could of fraised it better than that.

    Rodney polk
    3rd
    10-27-09

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  10. roxane braddockOctober 27, 2009 at 6:37 AM

    I would run my class like a kool teacher,let you eat n listen to music and talk. If yoy get your work done. Deontae.Bradley


    Deontae Bradley has made alot of mistakes. One of his mistakes was he spelled cool wrong he spelled it with a k and not a c. He also spelled and wrong he spelled it with a n instead of and. Another mistake he made was he should have put if you get done with your work in a complete sentence.

    ROXANE BRADDOCK
    10TH
    3RD HOUR
    10/27/09

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  11. Tiff $ Tiff M.October 27, 2009 at 6:39 AM

    October 5, 2009 6:22 AM
    ♥Jay.Aye.Why♥ said...
    i liked charles slide b/c it had dem nice cars and had the boondocks pics.The thing that was wrong with jay aye was that she didnt use capital letters.She also put b/c instead of because.She put dem nice cars when ity is suppose to be thoses nice cars.Pics should be picture.

    Tiffany Meridy

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  12. MontelOctober 27, 2009 at 6:39 AM

    i think it means if you fail or succeed it's nobodys fault but your own, and you control yourself.

    daquisha street
    9th
    9/28/09

    I think it means if you fail or succeed it's nobody's fault, but your's and you can contol it.

    Montel Brown
    10th
    3RD Hour
    10/27/09

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